Here're her detail shots: Detail shot version 1.0Detail shot version 1.3Improvements of 1.2:
I basically only changed the things I got Critique for; her ankles and her upper arms, so I'll skip on back and side views, because they're still the same.
I really think she looks better know, her overall style truly improved through those slight changes.Improvements of 1.3:
I pretty much redid her whole upper legs and did some slight changes on her lower legs in order to match them up with the upper legs.
Here are the three basic reasons for those changes:
- to make her taller and correct the proportions
- to improve the shape and the flow of her hip section
- to improve the color distribution on her legs
I think I was able to improve the flow on her hip section a lot, I also improved her ass in order to make it look more natural.
The longer legs make her ankles look more proportional now as well. I removed all the silver from legs, except the ankles, because I wanted her legs to be plain gunmetal grey. That may be too much now, but I really like that clean color distribution.